I was very late submitting my attempt last week and Friday Fictioneers wait for no woman, or man!
My grandmother told me many tales; some she made up, some she promised were true. In any event she should have written them down. She told me about the lamplighter and that my great grandfather liked to drink …
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields lights the path to Friday Fictioneers and we all follow as best we can. Thanks to her for the photo this week.
Genre: Memoir/Fiction
Word Count: 100
The Lamplighter
Granny told us many stories of the lamplighter. He lit the gas lamps in her town so folks could see their way home, or in her father’s case, to the alehouse. One night her father didn’t stagger home. They found him next morning face down in the stream, his jug still clutched in his hand.
Many supportive neighbours and a few of his drinking friends attended his funeral. My great grandmother baked all night, then lit the parlour lamps and held a wake, relaxing in her new found freedom, released from toil and childbearing.
She never mentioned his name again.
For we are very lucky, with a lamp before the door,
And Leerie stops to light it as he lights so many more;
And oh! before you hurry by with ladder and with light;
O Leerie, see a little child and nod to him to-night!
(from The Lamplighter – Robert Louis Stevenson)
A great story. Nice of you to share it.
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The more Fictioneers stories I read, the more I wonder who will miss me when I’m gone and who will rejoice!! 🙂
janet
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What a thought! We need you right there.
I haven’t read any other stories yet, saving the treat till later this evening (UK time)
Have a lovely weekend, Easter blessings to you and yours
Dee
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I remember that poem, lovely to read it again. And I really liked your story too. Very practical grandmother.
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I love the poem and some lines popped into my head as I was writing, so seemed right to include it.
Thanks for reading Sandra and I’m pleased that you liked my story.
Wishing you a very Happy Easter
Dee
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And the same to you Dee! 🙂
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🙂
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Never seen the poem but it’s a lovely read. And after reading some entries I must say body count is up this week.
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Hi Bjorn
Thanks for reading. It seemed appropriate to incldue the poem as some lines came back to me as I was writing.
Dee
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I do so hope I live a life where I am missed. What a tragic waste to have our loved ones GLAD we are gone!
Lovely story, the poem really matched prefectly
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Hi Carrie
It was a very difficult relationship from all accounts.
Thank you for reading, it’s good to hear from you
Happy Easter
Dee
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A woman after my own heart! Good for her!
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Thank you for reading, glad you liked her spirit!
Nice of you to leave a comment, thank you
Dee
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All the good deeds done by drunkards will be soon forgotten, except for this vice. a moving story..Wish you a happy Easter
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Thank you for reading
Happy Easter to you too
Dee
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Hi Dee
Great story – it sounds like her husband was a hard man to live with – that last line was brilliant. I love the poem at the end too.
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Yes I gather he was.
Thanks for reading and glad you liked the poem too
Hapoy Easter
Dee
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Dee,
Nice touch adding the poem. Nice job. Happy Easter!
Tom
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Thanks Tom
Happy Easter to you too
Dee
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I absolutely lovely this. A wonderful interpretation from the prompt ~ Penny 🙂
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Thank you Penny, much appreciated
Happy Easter!
Dee
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Happy Easter to you and your family Dee!
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Such a great tale of your past. I know the lamplighters used to do this to keep the citizens safe.
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Thanks for reading Joe
The lamplighters were before my time but my mother remembered them when she was quite young.
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Good she was glad he’s gone. Wish she left him earlier.
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Yes I’m sure, but she wouldn’t have been able to leave him in those days, she had to think about her children and had no money of her own.
Thanks for reading
Dee
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Really nice – the few lines at the end really completed the tone. Something about the innocent perspective and the truth of what happened to the father really worked well
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Thank you Brian, your comments are much appreciated. Good to hear from you.
Dee
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Dear Dee,
What a thought provoking, well-written story. The poem at the end was the perfect epilogue. Delightful from beginning to end.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS A blessed Easter to you.
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you so much, your comments are always welcome and appreciated.
Thank you for your Easter blessings, I return the blessings to you and your family for this special weekend.
Dee
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well i’m kinda glad she wasn’t so sad when he died ^^ relief is certainly better than grief. a great story and a really lovely poem
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Thanks for reading kz, glad you enjoyed it
Dee
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Well crafted, how your story hints of a larger backdrop, of how your great grandmother “relaxed in her new-found freedom.” And neat how you paired the lamplighter with your great grandmother lighting the oil lamps in her home; it made me think of a circle being closed.
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Thank you!
So glad you enjoyed the story, my great grandmother was an amazing lady, as so many were in those days.
Have a great weekend
Dee
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Well, there is certainly a story there. Can believe it is real, for it certainly must have been for so many. I love Robert Louis Stevenson, so a bow to him and a reminder of his craftiness is always welcome.
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Thank you for reading.
I think a lot of women of that generation had to just “grin and bear it”.
Like you, I am a huge fan of Robert Louis Stevenson and to include this poem seemed apt.
Have a great weekend
Dee
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Beautifully written, Dee. The poem at the end was the exclaimation point to the story. Well done.
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Thank you Russell, much appreciated
Dee
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I personally experienced that when it happened to someone close. I saw the relief on the wife and children’s faces. They were finally free of the shame, excuses, lies and yoke around their necks. Thanks for sharing this story…true or not.
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Thanks for your comments Lora. It must be so distressing having to live like that, I hope your friend has found happiness.
Dee
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This was good. I was happy for your great grandmother.
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Thank you, me too. 🙂
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I’m glad I got to read this finally–great piece! It might be the conspiracies in my head, but I immediately thought that the lamplighter intentionally didn’t light the lamps to cause the husband to lose his way and die, thus freeing up the wife.
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Very conspiratorial! Like it
Thanks for reading
Have a good weekend
Dee
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Thank you David, interested in the conspiracy theory – never thought of that one
Thanks for reading
Dee
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