It’s that special time of the week , the post for Friday Fictioneers. This week the colourful photo is courtesy of Doug MacIlroy – a great teller of tales. Each week the one and only Rochelle Wisoff-Fields casts her net and draws in writers from across the world, all eager to accept the challenge of writing 100 words, (no more, no less) inspired by a different photo each week. Join us…
Doug MacIlroy
NOT DROWNING, JUST OUT OF HIS DEPTH
Genre: Fiction
Word Count: 100
One day a man started a job. It was the job he had always dreamed of, but it brought him unhappiness. The job demanded skills he didn’t believe he possessed.
Dejected, he asked his grandfather for advice.
‘A fish set off on a journey. Swimming strongly and steadily, it encountered many problems but stayed on course. The fish found itself in churning water at the foot of a waterfall; it paused not knowing what lay ahead, then plunged in and battled to the top.’
‘If you believe you can, you will, if you believe you’ll fail you will; your choice.’
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I like this one Dee, the idea of life’s challenges and our decisions to strive or not. Well done. Clancy.
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Thank you Clancy, so pleased you like it 🙂
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What a great take on the classic parable!! I really do like this one, and, quite frankly, I feel that we don’t get enough of these kinds of stories any more. There’s something about the classic story within a story that teaches us a lesson we can apply to life that stays with us longer than many other kinds of tales.
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Thank you Sandra, glad you liked it. The story seemed to write itself, but needed a lot of editing to get to the 100 words needed.
I enjoyed writing this and also like the idea of a story within a story, I am thrilled that you think this worked.
Dee
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Now THAT’S a good little parable there. Something new and fresh. Dee, thanks for this!
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My pleasure Kent!
Good to hear from you and pleased you enjoyed it.
Take care
Dee
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Wise advice Dee. Nice one.
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Thank you Sandra, enjoyed writing this one.
Dee
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Dear Dee,
What a great adaptation of that saying. Your title was perfect as well. I had a smile on my face as I thought of many people I’ve worked with down through the years. Well done.
Aloha,
Doug
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Dear Doug
Thank you. I’m so pleased you liked the story. Your photo said ‘Japan’ to me and I thought of how revered their older generation are and the story came from there somehow. Great photo.
Take care
Dee
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Dear Dee,
A lot of depth and truth to a seemingly simple story. Jobs, even the most ideal, often bring stress rather than fulfillment. And there’s a lot to your ending line. One’s belief that he or she will fail is more, often than not, a self-fulfilling prophecy. Good one.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
I think we all doubt our abilities from time to time, worrying if we are good enough. A little self belief goes a long way.
Thank you for reading and for your comments.
Take care
Dee
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Good advice, Dee. We have a choice in life. I enjoyed this. – Amy
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Thank you Amy, glad you enjoyed it
Dee
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Nice!
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Thank you Dawn
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The zen of the mind – it’s not the doing or the not-doing that counts. It’s the belief. Thanks for a cool story.
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Very true, thanks for reading and leaving a comment, it’s good to hear from you
Dee
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Nice work, Dee, I like how you incorporated the parable into your 100 words. No easy task, I’m sure.
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Thank you Patti – there was a lot of editing…
Nice to hear from you
Dee
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