Thanks to Rochelle for continuing to host this wonderful group which I have missed these past few weeks. Thanks also to Kent Bonham for the intriguing photo.
Genre: Fiction
Word Count: 100
Bonding on a Summer Night
Harry likes the freedom of the road, and the freedom to play his games miles away from Linda and arguments about D-I-Y. He likes overnighting in the foreign lorry parks, better equipped than ones at home. Tonight, he can’t choose between John Travolta and James Bond, but the redhead sitting at the bar can’t resist him. Anticipating the night ahead, he takes the drink she offers and leans in.
The truck, a bit heavier than expected, takes the early Channel crossing. In the Centre Hospitalier de Calais, the gendarme repeats his questions, Harry stares at him, his mind totally blank.
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A great beginning of a spy story, or a compromising story. Nicely done.
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Thank you Mike, much appreciated.
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Illegals? Or am I just over-preoccupied with the latest scenes in Calais? Nice one Dee, and a different take on the prompt. I thought I’d just responded to a different story from you but I can’t find it now.
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Yes and I’m preoccupied with the scenes too. So worrying, friends in Kent are really distraught about what’s happening as the illegals not caught just seem to disappear into the countryside! Hope all
Is well with you, great to catch up again.
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Whether or not I was meant to, I too thought ‘illegals’. Living just along the coast from Dover it’s a really big topic around these parts.
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Hi Rosey – yes the story was about ‘illegals’ stealing the truck to get to UK, I almost had them killing the driver but then decided against it. They are causing a huge problem along the coast, friends in Kent are really worried. Thanks for reading 😊
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I think he has a different kind of freedom now! Good story!
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Thank you, something he won’t want to repeat !
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That must have been some night, but he’ll never know. Or will he? Interesting story leaving me with lots of questions…
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Well he lived to regret it at least … Lots of problems at the French ferry ports with illegal immigrants trying to get to UK , stowing away on trucks and making a run for it once they’re here … Thanks for reading
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Oh well…
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Dear Dee,
It seems that it’s the lorry the redhead can’t resist and she’s taking Harry along for the ride. I’ll admit I had to look up Calais. Thank you for the eye opener.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
It’s a very bad problem and the French have had lots of trouble at the ports with illegal immigrants trying to board trucks heading to the UK. The news is quite bad, as up to 350 stowaways were removed from vehicles in four hours in Calais yesterday.
Evidently our government are deploying more border staff and ‘sniffer’ dogs to France in an attempt help.
Thanks for reading, hope you are keeping well
Take care
Dee
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Intriguing story.
AnElephant confesses that earlier comments filled in the blanks in his feeble brain.
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Well AnElephant can’t know everything… a topical story and sadly a bit too close to home for people in the SouthEast of the UK.
Thanks for reading.
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So many sad roads for refuges… so many dreams … such ordeals in trucks and on boats…
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Dreadfully sad and so many deaths… not sure how we are going to find a solution when their homelands are in so much turmoil and their futures so bleak.
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Something in that drink, and maybe now he won’t hate his homelife so much! Very well done!
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Thank you Yolanda, part of a bigger problem I think.
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My goodness he sounds sleazy.
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Hopefully those days are now over… thanks for reading.
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A very topical story and very well written. I heard a piece on the radio from a haulier saying if somebody gets into his lorry that is carrying perishable goods they have to ditch all that food because of the risk of contamination. So many companies are losing so much money and the price of fresh vegetables in the UK is going up as we supply is low because of this.
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A very difficult situation for everyone and no-one has a solution. The hauliers haven’t got a chance against the huge numbers of immigrants swarming over their vehicles and yes you are quite right, loads are being dumped every day.
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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A friend’s daughter is just back from a school trip to France. On opening the boot of the coach back at school in Hertfordshire they found 4 men – severely dehydrated. Had stowed away a few days before Calais in fact. One did run away.
Very up to the minute story. Well done!
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Thanks Miranda, that must have been an terrible shock for the driver or whoever opened the boot of the coach. I saw photos of men balancing on the bonnet of a car on the motorway yesterday, edging closer and closer to the rear of a truck, so close that the driver can’t see them, and then trying to open the rear doors to get in!!! Utter madness.
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I like the layers of story you’ve woven together. Harry and his foolishness, and the larger story of refugees in Calais.
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Thank you Margaret, I’m pleased you liked the story, Calais is a huge problem area and I fear it is only going to get worse.
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Since I am not familiar with the root of your story I read this as a cheating husband/truck driver who wrecks!
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The root of the story is the problem facing truck drivers at Calais etc due to migrant problems and hi-jacking of trucks & their loads. It’s getting worse and not much seems to be done to protect drivers. Thanks for reading Dawn
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I did google it to try to get some understanding.
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I’m sure it’s going to get worse before it can get better. But no rambling from me. This is an excellent, thoughtful and timely story.
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Unfortunately that seems to be the case. Thank you for your kind comments and for reading 😊
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