Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Genre: Fiction
Word Count: 100
A Magical Tour
The tour was sold out. Placing a brochure on every seat, Susan anticipated a very busy day.
A middle-aged couple queried everything about the legend and the castle. Later, visiting the cave below, while she warned everyone about the dangers of straying from the path, the man shouted from the far wall, ‘it says in your blurb that Merlin lived here, how could you know?’
‘Yes, how could you know?’ the woman sniggered. Susan pointed to an opening behind them, ‘you could find out in there.’
Afterwards, everyone complimented her on a great experience.
No-one mentioned the two empty seats.
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Thanks to our FBM Rochelle for supplying the photo for the prompt this week and for being there week after week ….it means a lot.
For more about Cornwall, Merlin’s cave below Tintagel castle, you can check the English Heritage link
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Ha! Love the surprize ending. I think I like Susan very much.
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Thanks Alicia 😊
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Mysterious take, dangerous tour.
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Thanks Iain, dangerous for some 😊
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That’ll track them not to wander off the prescribed path! Although it doesn’t sound like there are second chances. 😶
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Thank you Christine, you’re quite right, Susan rules 😊
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We’re all going to have to get smarter than our phone’s auto-correct. That’ll TEACH me to double check what it’s done to my texts!
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I know it happens to me all the time😊
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I smiled, thank you.
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Thank you 😊
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Oh dear. Let’s hope that closest spirited them back to their car. 😎
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Hmm don’t think so. Thanks for reading 😊
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Susan is not one to be messed with! Brilliant.
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She certainly isn’t. Thanks for reading Keith 😊
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Dear Dee,
Susan does have her way of dealing with sniggering tourists, doesn’t she? I like her style. (And yours). 😉 Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Yes, she is very good at dealing with unbelievers … with a bit of help of course.
Thank you
Dee
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What a lovely surprise ending…. was it Susan or Merlin? We’ll never know.
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No, I don’t think we will. Thanks for reading Ruth😊
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Yikes! Don’t mess with susan.
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Definitely not! Thanks for reading 😊
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Haha! Very clever, Dee! That was fun! 🙂
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Thanks Kent 😊
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That was great! They shouldn’t have been so sceptical.
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Thanks Liz, great to hear from you 😊
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Oh my…bad tour guide. lol
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